NuclearPositron's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Excuse me, WTF?]

Not terrible

I liked some of the jokes, what is essentially what it is about in a flash. Also the randomness-factor is pretty high, which is a good thing =D.

Your drawing could be a lot better, though. I would work on that.
Besides that, i wouldn't use Microsoft Sam (it is him, isn't it) for the voice acting. It actually sounds terrible.

-Positron-

zizou98 responds:

Thanks for the rating! Also, I used At&t natural voices. ty, I'll try better next time.

[Domino Screen Link]

Newgrounds isn't for this

Newgrounds isn't for this kind of stuff,
You know youtube?
Well, go there....
For newgrounds, make an animation or something...

Platform710 responds:

Actually, all of these videos are on youtube, I wanted to see if a video would go over well. :D

[Mountain Range]

Needs more effort

Well,
This is pretty bad. Since it's your first animation, i'm giving you some tips:
- Don't make a loop of approx. 10 seconds and loop that a couple of times.
- The character becoming bigger 2 times when he is outside is just strange, fix it. I you want you animation to tell he has te grow up, at least let him get big one time. Nw it's just strange.
- Also, your graphics aren't very good either. If you want that style, you could at least polish it much more. But in my opinion, this is just a lazy style so you don't have to animate more.

I don't want to discourage you or anything, you just need a lot of practice and time to make good animations. Next time, put some more effort and time in it, and i'm sure it will get better ;)

Ef-X responds:

Thanks for the tips :D, I really appreciate it.