NuclearPositron's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Realized in Darkness]

Nice mood

I really like the mood ou set in the first minute. I think that was the best part. After that, it wasn't that intresting anymore and it sort of doesn't fit. I don't really know how to say this, but..... I just don't like it :/. I would suggest, make the piano louder and keep the pads. Maybe adding a clarinet or something with a lead. This way, the mood stays while the song changes.
The mood is the most important in this kind of songs. You did a great job at that part.

Overall,
7/10
3/5

Favyoun responds:

I totally understand what you mean. The reason that music has the slight shift randomly was because the way the character flashback changes, so that changed with it, I wish I had the animation complete so you could see it but 3D modeling certain things then animating is no easy task haha. Thank you for the amazing feedback

[Going Up!]

Sounds OK

It's a bit repetitive though. Also, atm it is just a drum loop with a bass over it. It sounds much like 3 instruments which just have 1 loop that plays over and over again. I would work on the arangement of this song. Some build ups, some added instruments etc. I think a breakdown would be very nice in this song. I hear a lot of potential, but this track isn't there yet,

horoshij4el responds:

thank you sir! i'm just a beginner but i'll practice and i'll make this track better

[Flight of Fiction]

Nice

I like this song a lot. The melody is awesome. Besides that, there's not much going on to keep it intresting though. The instruments are awesome. I like the marimba-thing that has the main melody with the support of the synth. Those two just seem fit together pretty well.
I think the drums could be mixed in a bit louder. At the moment, I can hardly hear them. I don't really know if this fits in drum 'n bass. I don't feel the fast rhythm and typical dnb drums.
Also, I think the bass is a bit too soft. It is a sort of combination between a subbass and a typical dnb bass. You should make a decision. If it's a subbass, don't make such a melody. It it has to be a dnb bass, make it dirtier.

Overall,
8/10
4/5

NationNinja responds:

Thanks!XD

[Templar's Honour]

I'm writing this, while listening, so bear with me

I really like the intro. The tubular bells (right?) give just the right feeling, along with the drums.
The only thing not fitting here is the bass drum I think, since it feels a bit analog compared to the wonderful sounds of the pads. I don't know how to bypass that, since you really need a 4/4 rhythm I think. Try another kick, maybe that works better.

Now it gets a bit boring, since there's not a lot happening, nice ambience though.

The part from 2:40 is nice. Just gives a little change, while maintaining the ambience. You did a wonderful job at maintaining the ambience during the whole song. The parts are just a little bit too long I think. It gets pretty boring after a
whole lot of bars of the same, while nothing is happening.

From 5:38 you prove you can do it. I feel like that part should come earlier. This is what I was waiting for the whole song :p. This is just awesone.

Overall,
nice ambience, but it just feels a bit too much copy and paste. The ending was great.
8/10
4/5

-Positron, of the Nuclear Teddies-

Fifra responds:

Much appreciated. will keep this info in mind for future songs

[Synth Sickness]

Good mood

You set a good mood with this music. I like a lot of the sound effects.
There isn't really a tight beat or something consistent within this music, which isn't neccessarily a bad thing. I missed it though. It is a choice you made.
Overall a pretty neat song though.

xandirt responds:

thank you :D